My pinon on Donald Trump to build a wall between america and mexico.I happily disagree with Donald Trump to be putting a wall between the two country's Mexico and America Donald Trump may think that he is doing great but he's just making everything unusable.
I strongly think that Donald Trump is a person who only cares for his own country here for some people trying to live their own life.
Hey Serenity,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team, and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
It was very interesting to hear your thoughts on this issue, and it's great to see you clearly justified (backed up) your opinion with why you think so. Your points are really persuasive and I like how you said you "happily disagree", this makes your post really interesting and immediately shows the reader how you feel in a succinct way. You've done well to remain respectful and impersonal in your writing while still criticising Trump.
Your image is really funny but, for maximum points next week remember to try an attribute any images you use from online by writing or hyperlinking to where you found them. Have a look at the activity page to see how the SLJ team has done it.
I'm looking forward to seeing more amazing work from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel